The two articles I am comparing and contrasting
based on evidence are “India’s War on Biryani Mixes Caste, Religion,
Cow-Avenging Vigilantes” by Sandip Roy and the article “Here’s Why Salads Feel
Feminine and Nachos Seem Manly” by Tanya Basu. In the first article written by
Sandip Roy the types of evidence that are used are a combination of primary
evidence, due to the interviews and direct quotes from what people have told
him. Compared to the second article written by Tanya Basu who uses primary evidence
but also secondary and evidence as well due to her talking about/ addressing
different experiments that were done on food stereotypes. The second article has more of a combination
of evidence branches versus the first article. Sandip Roy article is more of a
personal article based on outlook, general idea on how people felt on cow meat,
whereas, Tanya Basu article is more direct mixed with facts showing that there are
food stereotypes.
An example of a
primary source found the Sandip Roy’s article is “The women there follow many
rituals associated with his worship. “Our current polarized discourse does not
allow for the possibility that there can be Hindu-Muslim communities that are hyphenated
in their belief and practice,” says Mayaram” (3). This is a primary source
because he interviewed Mayaram and is now using her opinion as a supporting
argument in his paper. An example of a secondary source can be found in the
Tanya Basu article when she paraphrases an experiment done by marketers on food
stereotypes. She writes “In the first of a series of experiments, Zhu and his
team asked 93 adults which foods the o=considered masculine and feminine: baked
chicken versus fried chicken, baked potatoes, versus French fries, light potato
chips versus regular potato chips and baked fish versus fried fish. The results
showed, unsurprisingly, that there was a significantly tie to food and gender
perception. People were more likely to see the unhealthier options as masculine
and the healthier options as more feminine” (1-2). This is clearly a secondary
piece of evidence because she had to look up this information, cite it and then
paraphrased it into her own words.
Good job, particularly in the second paragraph. Watch out for sentence fragments though!
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